dont listen to those idiots
you are correct, and anyone who voted this down probably didnt get it.
it could be faster paced and , yes your english does need some work, but you make an excellent point.
that having been said, do you think you could send me a dvd of it so i can make copies for a few hundred of my friends?
just kidding.
work on your flash skills and you could have front page stuff, although a lot of americans have no sense of irony, and most dont appreciate satire.